Sunday, June 28, 2009

Hello, again. =)


A picture of a girl sleeping with a bunny ^_^->

Hiya~ Dawn Uzumaki here! =) Hehe, as I was looking back at my past posts I found out I spelled 'trickle' wrong [o_O] so I fixed it [^_^].

Though I was surprised Alina didn't comment on that... I also found a few minor errors in a the writing I rephrased from Priya's paragraph [Keep writing, Priya! =)]. Which reminds me, why hasn't anyone commented (on the post below)? I need criticism!!! [Yes, this is the time to kill my writing into pieces for all the times I have killed yours.]

I spent a while creating the piece below... I have no idea how to end things. Anyway, I'd like to ask others to enter more! And I don't worry about me editing it...okay, maybe a little. I'm not that bad, am I? >.< Please enter~!
~MoonBunny~

2 comments:

blahypoo said...

Um... Well, I don't really read all your stories, hehehe...
Anyway, I don't see your contest entry. WHERE IS IT?!

~MoonBunny~ said...

lol, I know that...

Contest entry...contest entry... Oh yeah! It's the post below this one labeled, 'End of the School Year/ Writing' which contains a picture that you're supposed to click on and etcetera.
Note: That post is not a real contest entry.

I guess this is sort of what I'm looking for. Something short yet shows your talent. If you cannot write something short, it's fine but...it shows craft on how you end your scene too.

Does that answer everything? ^_^ So from now on, if someone needs a question answered I'll just post a comment/ the answer beneath it, 'kay? =)

~MoonBunny~